I tossed the fourth suitcase in the trunk of my car and slammed the lid.
Thanks! I was channelling my own fed-up-with-this-crap for much of this book, hehe.
Omg. pulled me in from fhe first paragraph! Well done
Great start! Looking forward to reading more.
Congratulations on getting this project underway! I enjoyed this beginning...sets up an immediate conflict and makes me want to keep reading. I also like Mary's voice. Looking forward to next time!
Thank you so much, Janet!
Thanks! I was channelling my own fed-up-with-this-crap for much of this book, hehe.
Omg. pulled me in from fhe first paragraph! Well done
Great start! Looking forward to reading more.
Congratulations on getting this project underway! I enjoyed this beginning...sets up an immediate conflict and makes me want to keep reading. I also like Mary's voice. Looking forward to next time!
Thank you so much, Janet!